||[Nov. 2nd, 2007|02:48 pm]
Ok I writing a few fics right now and I want to post them right now so I was hoping that someone could look them over for me and tell me what they think of them.
First one up is a wreastling fic. staring Judas Masias and Alex Shelley with a side pairing of Raven and Steveie Richards and a hint of Chris Sabin and Alex Shelley and Kevin Thoren and Stevie Richards.
The flickering of the candle light was the only thing that lite the huge room, the room was empty save for the candles, and a platform with a throne on it. Sitting on the black throne was a tall man with sharp white eyes and a sneer across his face.
A sinister looking man in a red suit and a black cane in one hand walked into the room with a smirk. "Judas there you are, I've been looking for you, have you found the one you want yet?" The man asked.
The white eyed man looked at his father and smirked before tossing a black folder at him. "I want him," Then he tossed a red folder at him. "and get this one for Raven since it's almost my 'dear' brothers birthday."
Opening the red folder the man smirked. "Well looks like you've done your homework. Your brothers had his eye on this one for some time now." He said as he looked at the picture.
The streets where dark as Stevie walked down them to get home from work. He hummed to himself as he turned the corner and bumped into a tall man with black hair and peircing blue eyes."Sorry." He murmmered as he tried to move to the side only for the man to move back infront of him.
"You will come with me and things will be just fine." The tall man said with a glare.
Stevie glared right back at him. "Who the hell do you think you are?"
The man growled before grabbing Stevie and knocking him unconnsious. "To bad your for Lord Raven, you look like a tasty little thing. I'll just have to find a way to find out." He said with a smirk as he picked up the smaller man with ease and walked off.
"Who would you like to send to get your pet?" James asked as he got word that the boy had been captured by Kevin.
"No I will get him myself. I will have noone else touching what is mine." Judas said as he stood from his throne. "Make sure the rooms are prepaired for our gests." He said before disappearing.
James nodded before opening the black folder to see a picture of a blue eyed boy with black hair that had a patch of bleached blond, the name attached to the folder read Alex Shelley. Smirking he turned and left the room to make sure everything was ready.
Alex walked home, almost skipping because he was so happy. Chris Sabin, a guy he had a crush on since he had first met him five years ago,had just asked him out on a date for tomorrow night. He was going to go and get new clothes and he would need to style his hair, he was just so glad he had the day off to get ready.
"Het Alex wait up!"
Turning Alex grinned when he saw Chris running over to him. "Hey Chris! What ya doin' over this side of town?" He said pushing his hair back.
Chris smirked. "Well I got done early and saw you leaving and thought that I would walk you home." He moved closer till he had Alex pinned to the brick wall behind them. "But then I saw you and thought why wait for tomorrow for the fun when we could have it now."
Alex frowned. "Look Chris I know I've had a crush on you for a few years now, but I'm not about to jump into the sack with you." He said as he tried to push him away, only for Chris to push him harder into the wall.
Slow steady foot steps started to walk closer to them, but Chris didn't stop as he started to get Alex's pants open. Hearing a growl he turned to see a tall man with sunglasses on. "What do you want? I'm in the middle of something here pal." Chris sneered.
ok so that's what I have done of this one...I was planing on putting up the other fic but I'll do that some other time so just tell me what you think of this one so far.